Do you have your hero?
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She lives with her husband and their nine children on Cape Cod. Her new book, Two If By Seais in bookstores now. She used to be a spy during the Cold War. She keeps getting sicker. The man wants to hospitalize his mother, but his son insists that a journey would kill her.
The man plots to get his mother out and thinks that his son just wants her condition to deteriorate, the sooner to get the money. So, of course you know what comes next. I need a flow chart and a genealogy. The yearning to add just one more thing is a powerful flame.
I think people who keep pilling on plot are fearful, knowing they overloaded the boat, and that it could sink at any minute. And what about the butterfly effect? The whole world of accidental love between the covers hard covers! Hey, that was one sweet sub-plot!
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So why does any good writer kitchen-sink it?
Many, many good writers do, not just beginning writers, at least on the first draft. Certainly, no one sets out to clutter up a keen concept. It just happens, in the way you find yourself standing in the checkout line with a grocery cart filled to the brim when you only dashed into the store to buy milk.
Things feel too likely to pass up. What if you leave him out and the main plot feels like thin soup as a result? What if that secondary plot not to mention the tertiary plot is what elevates the story from smart mystery to literary suspense?
Those are all legitimate concerns, certainly, and a story is such an important, fragile thing. Every writer wants to give it her all, every time, but too many plot points can make oatmeal out of a good story.
How do you stop it? But just as the reward for sit-ups can be a lean middle, the reward for plot discipline can be a lean, compelling narrative.
If clarity is the payoff, and the primary, strong story is not affected to the point that anything major needs to be changed, then trim.
If the answer to this is yes, maybe you should. Always keep your out-takes. This major sub-plot may be superfluous in this particular setting, but may be the divine engine in another book or collection. There may be a good reason. Does the protagonist really have to go on six binges to prove she has a shopping problem, or will only two do the trick?
How many dreams of foreboding makes an obsession? How many set fires makes an arsonist? How many confrontations over infidelity adds up to a divorce?
Explore setting and scene and the relationships between the characters in more revealing detail. Enliven those relationships with a few lines of enhancing dialogue.Writing Spy Fiction: Epic Narrative Drive.
Now with an awesome story to tell, we need to tell it just as well and for that we need narrative drive, because that’s what readers of spy books want. They are not primarily interested in the beauty of language for its own sake.
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The shortlist for crime writing’s most wanted accolade, the Theakston Old Peculier Crime Novel of the Year, has been announced. Celebrating its 15th year, the Awards feature six titles whittled down from a longlist of 18 crime novels published by British and Irish authors whose novels were published in paperback from 1 May to 30 April Feb 20, · A spy novel needs to be thought out beforehand, even more so than novels of most genres.
Unlike, say, a quest fantasy, where plot points can be shuffled or cut out or added without too much trouble, everything needs to be compactly connected to the main plot.
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